Review of: "Design of an Educational Campaign Based on the Theory of Planned Behavior to Encourage People to Donate Organs: A Study Protocol"

it is evidence not evidences intention not intension Introduction: number not numbers In most cases, organ donation takes place when the donor is brain dead: needs restructuring The global statistics…..till the end of the paragraph: please state the unit of the numbers 20 per one million people is it percent or person?In text citations should be written in the same way 50% of brain death patients: 50% of brain deaths (eliminate patients) in which a person has grown up in delete the second in Among education interventions: educational campaigns have the highest penetration to audiences: highest influence upon audience Campaigns transfer specific messages: campaigns deliver specific messages Explanation of theory of planned behavior is incorrect please revise N.B: Direct determinants of individuals' behavioral intention are: attitude, subjective norm and perceived behavioral control According to the Karam et al. study, holding training courses, creating sensitivity among people and attracting the support of officials can improve the effectiveness of organ donation interventions: sentence needs restructuring