Review of: "Managing the User Crowds: An Effectual Approach of Business Model Innovation and Platform Envelopment for Co-Creation on a New Multi-Sided Platform Firm"

The abstract in question provides an insight into the research area and the focus of the manuscript.However, it can benefit from refining in terms of clarity, coherence, and comprehensibility. 1. Opening Statement:Original: "The growth of Internet firms these days starts to catch the strategic management scholar attention."Critique: This statement is informal with the phrase "these days".Additionally, it could be more direct.Suggestion: "Recent growth in Internet firms has garnered significant attention in strategic management research."2. Purpose & Rationale: Original: "However, the study about how Internet platform achieves their performance with their unique business model is very limited."Critique: The statement could be clearer about the specific research gap.Suggestion: "Yet, there is limited research on how Internet platforms optimize performance through unique business models."3. Main Focus: Original: "This research wants to fill this gap by platform envelopment attack typology to explain the strategic fit of business model innovation typology and envelopment attack typology."Critique: The wording is unclear and repetitive.Using "wants to" is informal for an academic abstract.Suggestion: "This study addresses this gap, employing platform envelopment attack typology to elucidate the strategic alignment between business model innovation and envelopment strategies." 4.