Review of: "Teaching fire safety through design-based immersion of National Building Code-2016 provisions to students of undergraduate architecture: a student feedback on the pedagogy technique"

How was the data analyzed?It needs to be shown in this Section.Introduction: is too short and lack a proper background situated in robust literature.Literature Background: One sentence cannot make a paragraph.This mistake was made several times.Objectives: "Integrate Part 4-Life and Fire Safety of the National Building Code 2016 into the curriculum of third year architecture students."This statement is a repetition and should be integrated with the previous objective.